Criterion A:
4- i know the book obviously because ive read it but i panicked and know it sounds like i looked it up on shmoop 5 mins ago ( i didnt but it sounds like that)
Criterion B:
like a 2 i dont know. im terrible at annotating and i get what shes trying to do but i am not good at explaining it
criterion C
2, there is some organization but i would lose track of myself
Criterion D
maybe a 2, probably too generous. im not formal but i dont sound like im talking to my friends either
Helynea- the IOC you uploaded is from the practice we did in class, not the passage you posted here.
ReplyDelete- Need to establish context
- Think about thesis to guide organization
- Purpose of passage- cite and analyze evidence that proves purpose...HOW and WITH WHAT EFFECT
- Need conclusion